Greenjuice's Designer Application

Discussion in 'Builders' started by Greenjuice, Jan 5, 2016.

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Is this designer worthy?

Poll closed Jan 19, 2016.
  1. Yes

    5 vote(s)
    27.8%
  2. No

    13 vote(s)
    72.2%
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  1. Greenjuice

    Greenjuice Member

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    1. What is your in game name? Greenjuice
    2. Are you a Citizen? Yes
    3. Are you the only builder on the project? Yes
    4. What is the coordinates to your project? Are there any nearby nether portals? X:-17077 Z:-718. It's north of Millennium City's entrance. Start there and you should find it easily.
    5. Post at least 2 pictures of your plot. YOU MUST POST PICTURES. You may need to shrink them first and there are lots of sites to shrink pictures for you.
    Gallery (open)
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    These pictures show the development of the build, but the last picture is the finished version. If you have some time you can easily get to it yourself by taking a stargate in the town hub to Millennium City, as described above in 4.

    6. Make sure you enable a 2 week poll on your thread! let us know if you need it edited in. Done
     
  2. Greenjuice

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    BTW, if you voted no it would be very useful to know why you voted no, so I can do better in the future. Thank you
     
  3. Lego90210

    Lego90210 Active Member

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    I voted no on the point that there is not much color or much eye popping variety in color. The structure looks decent in design but looks more as if it were a base frame for something bigger rather than an actual complete build. The fact that the structure appears to be floating on the water's surface is a nice concept, and the design looks like it can be added onto easily and can lead into a bigger, more vibrant design.
     
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  4. rocman

    rocman Active Member

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    I can tell this took you a while to do, and it looks pretty nice, but I voted no because, as Lego said, there isn't really that "Finished Build" vibe that I got from some other apps. Personally, I'd connect all the islands to the middle, and make a huge beacon design in the middle with Diamond blocks/Lapis/Cyan Wool. Best of luck to ya Greenjuice
     
  5. Exavious

    Exavious Forum Legend

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    It is a good design, I also like to use lots of stone brick in my builds, however this looks to me to be unfinished. It's missing color, variation. The design work is good! Just needs be more appealing to the eye than all grey.
     
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  6. Aqua

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    Denied.
     
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