Parritoman wasn't able to post so I posted it for him 1. What is your in game name? parritoman 2. Are you a constructor? Yes 3. Are you the only builder on the project? Yes 4. What is the warp to get to your plot?(ex. /p h Thr0ttie) /p h:2 parritoman I didn't want to spam the thread with pictures so it would be better off if you checked out the plot
You have some good ideas but I'm gonna tell you why this is a no... 1) I want you to go visit the designer plot of chophappyman - and look around and to see what is different between your build and his build. Look at all of his details and ways he used blocks like few people use them - the drawer handles, the shower heads, how each room is different. 2) Your build isn't bad but the biggest problem is that there are a lot of flat surfaces - don't get me wrong, I like your trees, I like your white fencing, but essentially it's a big square house with giant rooms that are mostly empty...the lighting is nice, I wish more people light up rooms like you... 3) Your upstairs area - no way to get there, nothing in there, boring and wasted space architecturally. It's like you put a ton of work into the kitchen, which is nice, and rather than make a nice upstairs area, you just closed it off. Your skills are apparent, but your not experimenting with blocks, or taking the extra time to think, "If this were a real house, what would be in this room?" - your exterior looks like a swamp - and I like that you did something with it, but do you really think a house with a massive kitchen and full library would be built in the middle of a dangerous lawn? I hope you improve it and put a lot more work into it and think about how it would compare to a real life house - use chophappy as an example of what we want to see when we look at a house, but don't copy all of his ideas, come up with some of your own. Make me look at something and go, "Wow, I never would have thought of that..."
